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    Sorry, but I don't read caracter death. Too depressing, and for me, fanfictions should be fun.

    But if you assure me it's not Rodney or John who's going to die, I'll make an exception and give it a try.

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    It's not Rod or John. I swear. And it's not totally depressing


    Die Menschen fragen sich, ob es intelligentes Leben auf anderen Planeten gibt, doch ist meiner Meinung nach die Frage eher, ob es intelligentes Leben auf diesem Planeten gibt.

    PAINTBALL-TREFF (ab 18) 2012/13!
    Like the weighted companion cube, adding a <3 makes instant likable.

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    I like the drabble. I can visualize the happening clearly.
    I don't understand the "two words" at the end... Maybe it's just me being tired.
    It should say "bending down over him"
    Platsch!


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    @Schneebällchen: Ohps, already changing.
    The "two last words" of Ronon are "you first"


    Die Menschen fragen sich, ob es intelligentes Leben auf anderen Planeten gibt, doch ist meiner Meinung nach die Frage eher, ob es intelligentes Leben auf diesem Planeten gibt.

    PAINTBALL-TREFF (ab 18) 2012/13!
    Like the weighted companion cube, adding a <3 makes instant likable.

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    Mhmmm... not totally depressing. You're right.

    Let's say, it isn't my cup of tea but it is well written, has some powerful images (the different colour of the scars) and I like the twist at the end.

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    @Antares: Thanks. I'm glad that you had a good word for it.


    Die Menschen fragen sich, ob es intelligentes Leben auf anderen Planeten gibt, doch ist meiner Meinung nach die Frage eher, ob es intelligentes Leben auf diesem Planeten gibt.

    PAINTBALL-TREFF (ab 18) 2012/13!
    Like the weighted companion cube, adding a <3 makes instant likable.

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    Industrious Mouse


    Title: Industrious Mouse
    Series: SGA
    Season: -
    Author’s note: I couldn't resist to at least give it a try. So, this gonna be my first English drabble (double drabble) and I really hope it’s clearly understandable and appears as funny as it was intended to be. Enjoy!


    Dr. McKay was in his laboratory. Meanwhile, everyone was waiting for the finale breakthrough which should be the investigation of an ultimate weapon against the wraith.
    John was entering the room and found himself quite amazed.

    "Astounding!“, John said whilst having an extremely weird look on his face.

    "What is that astounding besides the fact that if I’d try to explain to you what I’m doing here you wouldn't understand a single word.“

    "Well, you do your experiments and I do mine!“, John revealed obviously grinning.

    "Hang on a second! When you say experiments… Do you mean women?“

    "Rodney, the world doesn't only consist of women…“

    "Yeah, I know but I’d bet you didn't.“

    "Back on topic, I just figured out that you’re like these little mice trying to catch some cheese.“

    "What? How can you compare me with such dull beings?“

    "The point is, every time I come into this lab and bring some sandwiches you find the solution just in time. Have you ever wondered how this comes?“

    "No, not even once. Seriously, as long as my brilliant brain solves all the problems…“

    "Right, humble as usual.“, John rolled his eyes, took the empty plate and went away.
    Geändert von Rose Tyler (21.12.2014 um 18:50 Uhr)
    Something old,
    something new,
    something borrowed,
    something
    blue
    .

  8. Danke sagten:


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